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I don't know what my fault is. I feel that these days I have been keeping my diet pretty tight. But how come this my dear cheek is still stretchy. And a lot of people who take a look at it want to pinch it. It makes me more resentful. It is resentful... resentful... resentful... Veeeery resentful. What is my fault? Weep... Weep... did the fault come from the descendant from my beloved father and mother that makes my cheek really puffed-up. I don't think so. They are not fat either.
Aku nggak tahu apa salahku. Aku ngerasa belakangan ini dietku udah cukup ketat kok. Tapi kenapa sih sang pipi ini tetep juga melar. Mana orang-orang yang ngeliatnya pada pengen nyubitin lagi. Bikin tambah sebel. Pokoknya sebel... sebel... sebel... Sebeel banget. Apa salahku? Hix... hix... Apa jangan-jangan salah dari turunan gen-gen ayahanda dan ibunda tercinta yah yang bikin pipiku tembem begini. Gak juga ah. Mereka gak gendut kok.
Aku nggak tahu apa salahku. Aku ngerasa belakangan ini dietku udah cukup ketat kok. Tapi kenapa sih sang pipi ini tetep juga melar. Mana orang-orang yang ngeliatnya pada pengen nyubitin lagi. Bikin tambah sebel. Pokoknya sebel… sebel… sebel… Sebeel banget. Apa salahku? Hix…hix…Apa jangan-jangan salah dari turunan gen-gen ayahanda dan ibunda tercinta yah yang bikin pipiku tembem begini. Gak juga ah. Mereka gak gendut kok.
I don't know what my fault is. I feel that these days I have been keeping my diet pretty tight. But how come this my dear cheek is still stretchy. And a lot of people who take a look at it want to pinch it. It makes me more resentful. It is resentful... resentful... resentful... Veeeery resentful. What is my fault? Weep... Weep... did the fault come from the descendant from my beloved father and mother that makes my cheek really puffed-up. I don't think so. They are not fat either.
Tapi kalo dipikir-pikir lagi kok malang juga yah nasibku.
Aku ingat betul ketika aku masih kecil. Kira-kira seumuran lima tahun lah; saudara-saudaraku datang ke rumah. Dan mereka semua lantas begitu bahagia melihat wajahku. Bukannya apa-apa dan kenapa-napa. Mereka seperti dapet mainan baru.
Mainan apa? Apalagi kalau bukan pipiku yang menggemaskan ini. Dicubit pipi kiri, dicubit pipi kanan. Mereka sih seneng-seneng aja. Ketawa ketiwi. Nggak tahu apa bahwa yang empunya pipi ini merasakan sebuah derita lahir dan batin. Perih di pipi, perih pula di hati. Sampe akhirnya aku menangis… Huaaaaa. Mereka baru berhenti. Ganti mengelus-elus
"Cup cup anak manis jangan nangis dong."
But if I really think about it again my fate was really unfortunate.
I remembered truely when I was still small.
Approximately when I was five years old; my relatives came to my house.
And all of them then were so happy to see my face.
Not anything and and not anywhy.
They seemed like they got a new toy.
What toy? What else if not my cheek that passionated them. They pinched the left cheek, then pinched the right cheek.
They were so very happy then.
Laugh laugh.
They did not know that the owner of this cheek felt a suffering on both the body and heart.
Pain on the cheek, pain also in the heart.
Until the end I cried… Huaaaaa. Only then they stopped, changed to caressing.
"Choop choop the sweet child should not cry please."
Lebih parah lagi waktu aku SMA, aku inget banget ada temanku bernama Rudi. Anak yang menurut pandanganku termasuk paling badung satu sekolahan. Emang sih secara umum anaknya baik, gak ngerokok, taat aturan sekolah bahkan Pancasila dan UUD’45, gak pernah bolos, lumayan pinter dan berprestasi pula. Lha terus kenapa kok aku anggep badung? Ya itu tuh. Dia paling demen cubitin pipiku. Aku ngelamun dikit dicubit. Aku lengah dikit dicubit. Mana cubitannya konsekutif dan konsekuen lagi. Setiap hari. Sehari tiga kali. Sehabis makan dan sebelum tidur ( kok kaya minum obat aja yah ). Yaah pokoknya pada intinya sering banget deh.
It was more serious when I was in SENIOR HIGH SCHOOL, I remember truely that I had a friend named Rudi. A child that according to my view is one of the naughtiest on the school.
It is indeed generally the child was good, not smoking, obeyed the school rule and even the national ideology and national law, never skipped class even once, moderately clever and high-achieving also.
Well then why how come I said that he is naughty?
Yes, because of that.
He liked to pinch my cheek very much.
If I daydream a little I was pinched. When
I was careless a little I was pinched. His pinches were consecutive and consistent.
Every day.
Three times a day.
After eating and before sleeping (how come it looks like taking medicine?).
Yeah no matter what it was really often.
Aku pikir sih ketika masuk kuliah pengalaman-pengalaman memilukan itu akan berakhir. Apalagi kan aku masuk ke univ yang cukup ternama. Ehem… ehem… Aku yakin deh, anaknya pasti pinter-pinter, baik-baik, dan alim-alim. Uuuh tapi kenyataan tak seindah impian. Temen-temen disini masih aja suka ngeledekin aku gendut. Masih juga jahil-jahil. Untungnya sih gak ada lagi yang suka nyubit-nyubit pipi ini. Hahaha.
Maklumlah soalnya kan aku udah beri larangan keras bagi siapapun. Termasuk sahabat-sahabat dekat. Mengagumi boleh tapi tak boleh menyentuh. Apalagi mencubit. Dilarang keras. Verboden. Tiba-tiba….
I thought when I went to university, the sympathetic experiences will end.
Moreover I entered to a university that was famous enough.
Ehem… ehem… I was convinced, the students were definitely very clever, well, and very devout.
Ugh ugh but the reality was not as beautiful as the dream.
Friends here still liked to tease that I was fat.
Still were also very rascal. Fortunately there was no one that liked to pinch this cheek. Hahaha.
They understand that in this matter I have given them a ban for everyone.
Including close friends.
They might admire me but it is not allowed to touch me. Not even pinch.
Banned hard.
Verboden. And suddenly….
Buk!
"Adaw… "
"Pagi Gina," sapa si Yanti dari belakang dengan senyumnya yang cerah. Tanpa rasa bersalah atau berdosa seikitpun.
Duh… duh.. aduuuh…
"Kenapa, aku mukul terlalu keras yah?"
"Masih nanya lagi. Sakit tauk."
"Maap deh maap. Abis kamu juga lagian. Pagi-pagi gini udah ngelamun. Mikirin sapa tuh? Si uhuy yah…"
"Idiiih… thanks yo. Gak ada istilah uhuy-uhuyan dalam kamus gw.. "
"Yah elah pake sok-sokan."
Bam!
"Ouch..."
"Morning, Gina," Yanti greets me with his bright smile. Without any feeling of guilty or sinful.
Ouch.. ouch... a-ouch..
"Why, did I hit you very hard?"
"No question asked. Very painful you know!"
"Sorry, sorry. It is your fault anyway. Even on a morning you were daydreaming. Who were you thinking about? The Uhuy guy?"
"Oh no!!!!, very thanks to you. No meaning of Uhuy in my dictionary.."
"How come you are putting on airs."
Sebenernya si uhuy yang dimaksud tak lain dan tak bukan adalah Gunawan, seorang cowo yang juga sejurusan dengan mereka. Sebenernya sih tuh cowo biasa aja. Bener-bener biasa deh. Semuanya biasa. Rambut biasa, mata biasa, wajah biasa, senyum biasa, pinternya juga biasa. Cuma satu yang luar biasa ..... garingnya luar biasa. Kadang2 sih aku suka sempet sebel dibuatnya. Tapi di satu sisi dia bisa ngertiin aku apa adanya. Jadi hati ini gak jadi sebel lagi deh. Jadi luluh, adem ayem deh dibuatnya.
In fact the Uhuy meant actually is Gunawan, a person that is also in the same course with them.
In fact the boy is a normal boy. Very truly normal.
All are normal.
Normal hair, normal eyes, normal face, normal smile, the cleverness is also normal.
Only one is extraordinary....
His lameness is extraordinary.
Sometimes I am resentful because of him.
But on one hand he can accept me the way I am.
So this heart become not resentful again.
I am crushed, cool and calm because of him.
Belakangan ini si Gunawan itu emang lagi deket ama aku. Gak tahu juga deh kenapa bisa begitu. Sehingga mulailah beredar kabar-kabar tidak sedap di kalangan mahasiswa. Isu-isu dan gossip yang tak jelas dari mana asal mulanya. Parah deh. Padahal bener deh aku dan si Gunawan itu cuma temen biasa. Ndak ada apa-apa, ataupun gimana-gimana. Sueer….
In recent times the Gunawan guy is actually very close to me. I don't know why could be like that.
So not-nice news are beginning to circulate in between students.
Rumours and unclear gossips which I don't know where are their origin at first.
Seriously.
In fact it is true that I and the Gunawan guy are only normal friends. Nothing happened, or whatever it is. I swear...
Masalahnya kekuatan gossip itu uda lebih kuat. Jadilah malah tuh cowo bisa sampe dapet titel uhuy. Sebagai info, sebenarnya kata uhuy itu dianugrahkan sebagai kata ganti orang ketiga tunggal bagi orang yang lagi dalam proses PDKT. Nah, sebutan kata uhuy untuknya menandakan dia lagi PDKT ama aku. Apa bener sih begitu? Mana aku tahu… dan lagian mana aku tempe?
The problem is that gossip power even much stronger. Therefore, that guy even get title: uhuy. For your information, uhuy is stated for a third singular person representative on a guy which is in "approaching" process. So, the uhuy statement show that he is in process of approaching me. Is it true? Who knows?
Kalo emang bener begitu rasanya sih gak sepenuhnya bener deh. Coba aja lihat tingkahnya. Dia toh kayanya emang bergaul dengan cara yang serupa dengan segala macem temen cewenya. Kadang-kadang rada usil pula. Ah, dasar laki-laki. Untung dia gak suka usilin aku dengan pipiku yang menggemaskan ini. Kalo gak bisa sudah hancur berkeping-keping persahabatan yang aku bangun dengannya selama ini.
I think it’s not necessarily true. Look at his behavior. He talk and behave in the same way with all his friends (girl). Sometimes, a bit naughty. Ah, damn guy. Fortunately, he doesn’t like to pinch my cheek, otherwise our good relationship which is maintained so far will be destroyed.
Tapi aku toh cuek-cuek aja ah. Dia toh juga sering cuek ama aku. Emang sih kadang-kadang jadi perhatiaaan buanget, tapi kadang-kadang cuek juga. Aku bingung deh. Kata temen-temen sih sebenernya dia itu suka sama aku. Kalo di sinetron-sinetron remaja masa kini sih disebutnya jatuh cinta githu.
However, I just don't ignore. He also does the same thing to me. Sometimes, reaallyyyy care, sometimes he is ignorant. I’m confused. My friends said that he likes me. In teenagers telenovela, it is said as fall in love.
Yah kalo emang bener githu sih ya ga pa pa. Soalnya, benernya aku juga lumayan simpatik kok sama dia. Ramah, baik, perhatian. Yah meski emang garingnya parah sih. Tapi okelah. Yang paling penting. Ia gak suka ngatain aku gendut. Dan gak suka nyubitin pipi.
If it is true, it’s ok for me. Coz actually I also quite put a symphaty to him. He is cheerful, kind, caring. Even though he is lame. Sooo lame. But it’s ok. The most important thing, he doesn’t say I am fat, and he doesn’t pinch my cheek.
Suatu ketika Gunawan mengajakku makan siang bareng. Yah, aku sih oke oke aja. Kenapa tidak? Sekalian kan aku bisa pinjem catetan lecturenya kemaren. Maklumlah kemaren aku ketiduran. Lagi kebanyakan pikiran. Cieeh kayak orang penting aja. Hohoho….
Kami duduk, diam, dan tenang. Sebelum kami sempet order makanan, Gun mulai membuka pembicaraan lebih awal….
One day, Gunawan ask me to have lunch together. I am ok to his offer. Why not? I can also borrow his lecture note for yesterday lesson. I was sleeping in lecture theatre yesterday. So many think and stuff… Like a businessman you know. Hohohoho...
We sit, be quiet, and calm. Before we order the food, Gun starts to speak:
"Gina, aku tahu pipimu tembem."
"Grrr, apaan sih. Terus kenapa?"
Aku sebel. Aku pikir dia bener-bener ngertiin aku, ternyata dia juga bilang aku gendut. Tidaaak… Kenapa mesti ada satu orang lagi yang mesti mengungkapkan “fakta" itu kepadaku.
"Banyak orang bilang pipi tembem itu gak begitu bagus."
"Iyah, aku emang jelek, " kataku cemberut. Sensi.
"Tapi…. " kata Gun lagi…
"Tapi apa?! seruakku dengan sewot…. Sebel sebel…
"Ups, kamu marah ya?" Tanya Gun dengan muka melas nan memprihatinkan. Ngeliat mukanya aku pun luluh.
"Nda... nda pa pa. Kenapa sih Gun?"jawabku dengan rileks
"Tapi, tapi… aku… aku mau ngomong sesuatu ama kamu Gin. Penting.." kata Gun sambil menundukkan wajahnya. Entah dia malu atau takut... atau sungkan?
"Gin, I know your cheek is stretchy."
"Grrr, so what?"
I am angry. I think he really can understand me. But he also said I am fat. Nooo, why must there be one more person who reveal that “fact" to me?
"Many people said that stretchy cheek is not so good."
"Yeah, I am ugly," I said frownly. Sensitive.
"But…" Gun says again.
"But what?’ I say angrily. Resentful… resentful.
"Ups, are you angry? Gun asked melancholicly. Seeing his face, I melt.
"nooo… no problem? What’s wrong, Gun?" I ask relaxly.
"but… I… I want to say something to you Gin. Important," Gun said bowing down his face. Either he is shy or scary?
Deg! Jantungku berdegup kencang. Dan makin lama makin kencang. Aku ndak tahu perasaan aneh apa yang ada pada diriku sekarang. Aaaargh mana mungkin. Mana mungkin. Darahku berdesir makin kencang. Dag dig dug. Kenapa dengan diriku? Masa Gun bisa membuat aku begini?
Deg! My heart beats very fast. And become faster and faster. Aaargh impossible. Impossible. My blood flows quicker. What’s wrong with me? Why can Gun make me like that?
Ia melanjutkan kata-katanya… masih dengan terbata-bata…
"Aku…. aku…"
"Apa?"
"Boleh gak Gin aku?"
He continues his statement… still with tremble…
"I…. I…"
"What?"
"Gin, could I...?"
Pikiranku makin melayang nda karu2an. Sampai2 aku lupa kalo tujuan awal ke kantin ini adalah untuk makan siang. Hmmm, apa mungkin sih kata teman2nya selama ini benar? Gun selama ini diam2…. aaargh, wajahku memerah, tapi aku nda mau Gun tahu. Kalo sebenernya... Jangan dulu. Aku tundukkan wajahku. Rasanya ia akan mengatakan kata itu. Ya pasti ia akan mengatakan kata itu…
.
.
.
My thought flies away. I almost forget that I go here to have lunch. Is it true that his friends gossip about Gun is true? Gun so far… without any words… Arrgh… my face turn red, but I don’t want Gun knows. That the truth… Don’t
I bow down my face. I feel that he will say that word. Ya confirmed that he will say that word...
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.
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"Gin, aku….. boleh pinjem duit dulu nda? Duitku habis. "
"Gin, could I borrow your money? I don’t have anything left."
Written by: hgs
| Ini dia balada Gin dan Gun
Sehabis makan dan sebelum tidur itu sikat gigi, bukan minum
obat.
Mana aku "tempe"? Maksa abis....
pasti ia akan mengatakan kata, "boleh pinjem duit dulu nda?"
Dienk...
Jangan2 Gun ini maksudnya Herry GUNadi. Sama garingnya...
kriuk-kriuk....
(hore komen pertama)
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| Tuink tuink... lah memang saya yg nulis cerpen ini. :s
:s
Regards
~HgS~
Herry Gunadi Sudibya [sg], 27 Mar 2007, 2:05 reply
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| mmm.. ^^'
ternyata ini cerita joke ya. harapannya dari pertama
sebenernya mo menarik moral dari ceritanya sih
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| ckep...bunget sih nt cerpen,,,
agak nggantung sih...
lanjutin yaw,,,
biar lebih bagus getooooo....
be your self...
buat pengarang...kembangin terus ya...
buetlah yang lebih menarik daripada ini...
heheheh,,,,87x
Keyko SukEnti... [id], 18 Nov 2008, 3:42 reply
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| Wow, hanya itu yang bisa kuucapkan
Sungguh mendebarkan, tapi di akhirnya aja
Well, Gina... atau siapa sich dia, selamat yah, ... kamu
masuk Kejut.com
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| She says Gun is lame, too lame alias garink. Ternyata
ceritanya juga garink..
AzizJr [id], 3 May 2007, 8:06 reply
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| asu lah pekok seng gawe sopo. cendik bener asu lah delete ae
sempal ngene mending daanku WKwKWkwkwkWk
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| aku kasian mau pun garink gua kasi penilaian yg lumayan
bukan lumayan deng malah sep paling tinggi kWkWkWkwkwk dari
pada ancur nilai dikit
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| i am very like this short story
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| I like this story
I don't know why all of u say that GARING
I dont think so
I just wanna say GOOd
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| saya tertarik dgn crita ini, walaupun saya hanya membaca
titlenya saja. tapi saya sangat beruntung karena ini bisa
memudahkan bagi para manusia yang malas mentransletnya.
thanks ya. mohon untuk di kembangkan ceritanya.saya
tunggu.karena ini menyangkut dengan materi pembelajaran saya
fat-cool [id], 18 Jun 2007, 3:25 reply
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| bagus kok ceritanya...saya terbawa emosi loh sewaktu membaca
ceritanya; jadi ingat dengan saat-saat itu sewaktu menembak
doi walaupun akhirannya tidak sama seperti cerita yang di
atas
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| eh mantap jg karya kamu ulan print ya untuk baca2...heheheh
ulan [id], 27 Jul 2007, 11:37 reply
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| Thanks buat semua komen2nya yang uda masuk. Semoga bisa jadi
bahan improvement saya di masa mendatang.
Kalo ada yang berminat... cerita2 saya yg lain bisa dibaca
di http://hgsstory.blogspot.com. (Numpang iklan nih)
Hehehe... Thanks...
Best Regards,
-HgS-penulis
Herry Gunadi Sudibya [sg], 27 Jul 2007, 13:23 reply
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| yah prtama mbaca sih penasaran banget.aku rsa critanya bkin
ktagihan mbaca n' nambah penasaran.critanya detail dari bayi
mpe dwasa.tapi kasihanny tiba-tiba waktu Gina pkirannya
sudah gk kruan tentang apa yg akan dikatain Gun ternyata
hanya mo ngatain pinjem duit cz khabisan duit. kasihn deh
Lho Gin
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| i apriciete this story. even this site is not strong enough
to shake many one. yech.... even if essensial.
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| It's very funny...!ceritanya lumayan menghibur.and kebetulan
lagi cari short story..ya udah ambil aje yang ini ho..ho..
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| Nice Story. Thanks for the Story
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| hahahaha... nice story... very funny...
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| oke lah....makasih ni bisa jadiin inspirasi buat
aku....
lola [id], 22 Sep 2007, 12:47 reply
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| aduuuuhh ...
baGus juGa ternyaTa ...
it's saMe wiTh mE ..
baGus juGa buAt jaDi cErita dePan skoLah .. !!! Xp
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| NIce and funny story.. Haha..
Nic [id], 26 Sep 2007, 4:03 reply
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| wahaaaaa...bagus banget
gue ambil ya untuk tugas sekolah....
ronie [id], 19 Oct 2007, 3:50 reply
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| yuhuuu....what a funny and interesting story. I'll take it
for my assignment...yeahaaa!!!!!!!!
ajoest [id], 19 Oct 2007, 12:14 reply
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| Thanks buat semua complimentnya. I'm happy to hear that.
Yang mau buat tugas sekolah boleh2 aja kok. Jgn lupa tulis
kutipannya ya. Hehehe... =p
~HgS~
http://hgsstory.blogspot.com
Herry (penulis) [sg], 19 Oct 2007, 13:05 reply
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| good bgt tw........................bikin lagi dunk..........
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| haloooooooooooooooooo
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| it's terible, it's a disaster..
let me guess,, when someone write down something this bad,
he or she must has no brain,,
no imagination, no creativity shown, nothing special..
it's just a piece of shit..
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| ya ampun....
bener2 ga nyangka masa akhirnya kya gtu....
bagusss.......
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| itZ nice...
gila!!!! bener2 gila!!!
n gila!!!!!
hwa...hwa...hwa...
mordca [id], 11 Nov 2007, 8:58 reply
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| oh my god..........................
your story is amazing,,,,he..69x
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| wakakakakakakakakakk...............
lutuna.........lutuna............
sha ampe ketwa/i lhooooooo!!!!
btw,yg bkn nie crpen mang bnr gendut y????
klo bner, sha pgn ikt nyubit dwonk!!!!! hew....
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| You are grazy......!
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| parah kaga jelas .....
n yang paling parah DATAR BANGET!!!!
kaga seru abis deh...
menang judul doank
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| heheheh lumayan lucu kirain mo nyatain
tp yg lebih bgsnya ada transletan b.inggs-nya jd bisa
skalian belajar..
bikin lg crita lain dong
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| thank so much,,,,,,,,,,, the story is very nice, this help
me to read anymore about short story.
thanks for twice
inot [id], 8 Dec 2007, 17:18 reply
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| saya pikir nich ceryta di tujuin m kita2 yang berbadan
gendut tapi okelah ..... !!!!! saya setuju2 ja n sempat
penasaran tauo.......k
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| yahuiiiiiiiiiii,mantep bener.......gw bener2 mpe ngerasa
kalo gw I'M fat girl nya.ngapain malu ,toh masih banyak
orang2 yang lebih gendut dari kita.iya thooooooo......
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| it's me bgddddddddddd
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| wekekekeke~~~
Ampon DJ! Perut aye ampe pecagh!
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| saya nggak suka cerpen kamu karna jelek sekali
:(
;
irma [id], 29 Jan 2008, 10:42 reply
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| too flat, no climax at all even you put the joke in the end,
just too flat.
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| ya ampun ga nyangka ya kirainnnnnnnnn mo ngomong
apa!!!!!!!ternyata................ minjem duittttttttttt
booooooooooooo sekalian aza dia minta dibayarin makan
hehehe.....
2 cwe_ cuantik [id], 13 Feb 2008, 2:37 reply
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| gila Sumpah.......
garINk BgEd Tw Gk?????
tapi...not bad lah...he...he
Hinata [id], 23 Feb 2008, 11:29 reply
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| ya ampyuuuunnn...............
cerita ne menyentuh banged tw gak???
ampe2 gw ngabisin 2 dus tisu............
bikin lagi duwonx....
tapi.bikinnya yang lebih menantang lagi yaw!!!!
CewE CutHe.....!!!! [id], 23 Feb 2008, 11:35 reply
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| serius pas gw baca.......
gw juga ikut deg degan.....
lucthu....
bikin lagi donkz....
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| kaga ngerti gw cerita na......
hahahaha.....
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| cerita kmu bikin perutku mules. sumpah dech! gokil
bget......... top abis daaaaaacccchhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Hwekekek..cerpeny wokke..b'hub.aye sndiri jg cubby jd kyk
byangin q yg ngalami ntu..cubby kn imut..hihi..tul?
Kyu_bie [us], 28 Mar 2008, 4:15 reply
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| ok
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| whew,,,cuuUuL.....
boleh g critanya Q pake' buat acara tukar plajar
ntar...??
;D
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| boleh juga nech ceritanya.................!!!!
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| akk sehh lum bacaa .
[maka'a gk bisa kasih rating'a]
phy , ngeliad komen'a ajj , kek'a ne cerpen seru laa .
^____^
keripikk [id], 24 Apr 2008, 10:23 reply
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| Ya. . .
Thanks a lot
cerpen kamu udah bantu aku n friends nyelesaiin tugas kita
dengan nilai bagus . . . .
Sukses iawh to karier nya . . . . . .
GeCiT [id], 12 May 2008, 8:24 reply
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| Biarpun Q lom bca smuaX.........
boleh dunk Q ambil bwat tugas................
he,he,he,he,,,,
vick [id], 21 May 2008, 7:30 reply
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| i tinhk the sroty is fnnuy! fsrit is nmroal but lsat is
fnnuy, but i dno't get the moarl form tihs sroty :D
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| wiii...keren..
thx ya cerpennya..mo w bkin bwt tgas inggris w ne..
hahaha..
icha [id], 16 Jul 2008, 6:11 reply
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| kerenn.. lucuu... buat tgs gw nii ;D
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| hahahahah. garing tapi kocak.
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| Otre lah....tapi short story nya kk SHORT banget ya.
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| ihhh....luthu and keren bgt
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| bgus jga critanya,, tpi di akhirnya kurang memwaskan..
haha.. msa Gun cma minjem dwid pdhal Gina uda dagdigdug
sgala.. tapi okelah.. hehe..
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| wahhhhhhh bruntung banget bs tahu website ini..i am so happy
cos i can explore my vocabulary n structure..thx a million
:D
benveyo [id], 12 Sep 2008, 7:51 reply
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| nice story.....
I am so glad to find this story
best regard
Adzkia Tanjung [id], 17 Sep 2008, 4:39 reply
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| Aku sampai terkencing-kencing di celana baca endingnya.
Passionated sekali, bikin anu gua makin anu dan pengen
nganuin anunya kamu. grinned
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| ya...ampun dapet inspirasi dari mana tuh...tadinya pengen di
copy buat tugas introtulit...tapi lucu juga
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| yaaaaaaaaaaaaaach....................lumayan bagus.cm,masih
ada yang kurang 1!haruze Gina terbengong2X donx!klo ga,malu
dkitlah Gina............
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| cerpenmu lumayan bagus, thaks ya bisa aq pake ngajar.
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| yach,lumayan bagus c,,,cuma masih ada yg kurang c,,,Gina
kurang bengong ato klo ga,malu dikit ke'..............
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| good story. good create and if you fat is not means you is
bad. like me now i'm think i'm the best same like the other
woman
( )
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| I think this story is very good...........
yuli [id], 22 Oct 2008, 7:06 reply
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| alhamdulillah ketemu cerpen yang da
english-indonesianya.....jadi bisa ngerjain tugas dengan
tenang...thanks yaaaaa
kahfi [id], 24 Oct 2008, 6:52 reply
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| iiiiiiiiiiiihhhhh aq ketipu,q pikir berakhir dengan
pacaran.tp g p2 aq suka jail bangets ceritanya.bikin lagi
donk !!!!
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| pertama Q baca cerpen ini rasanya aneh. lha gimana, bahasa
gaul yg begitu memasyarakat di kalangan Muda di zaman
sekrang ini ternyata juga bisa di translate kan ke English
juga ya.
Bagus utk ukuran cerpen spontan & kocak walau di teks asli
berbahasa gaul. di Englishnya pun tak kalah Funny &
Loonely..... hehehe
buat yang nulis, met dapet ketawaku...
Hahahahaha.......................
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| waiiizzzzzz bgUz BnGt CerItx......
cRiTaX q AmBiL Yh buAt TGaZ cErPeN Q.....
HEhE...AlX cRiTaX bGz.....
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| Good
Ana [id], 10 Nov 2008, 3:59 reply
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| wuachhhhh,,kren bgd sichhhh nt cerpen nya,,
kpn2 bwt yg lbh ren lg yaw,,,
akn sll q tunggu kog,,
slam knl yaw,,
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| I Love ur story.....!
aizha [cn], 18 Nov 2008, 9:53 reply
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| This short story is so simple but useful. Thanks, you have
help me to increase my vocab. What next?
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| hek..hek..hek aku bacanya sampek 2 x.. bagian akhir bikin
kepala jatuh bangun........good...
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| menurut gue gendut itu bukan akhir dari segalanya toh banyak
juga orang yang gendut tapi bisa jadi aktris, aktor, dsb and
dont give up okay?
tanya [id], 1 Dec 2008, 11:21 reply
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| ag jg ndut,tp ag msh te2p manusia,yg pnya tujuan,hehe....
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| your story lumayan juga..........
rin cuma mow ucpin thanks yaw..,,,,,jdi sa buat tugas dari
dosen
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| q jg sm kya ririn,mw ngucapin trmksh bnyk udh meringankn
tgsQ yg sklh d SBI ini
mr.X [id], 5 Dec 2008, 14:24 reply
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| hehehe idup tu berfariasi bro....nyantai....tunjukkan
bakat-mu s3m@n9@t
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| minta short story yg sedih-sedih dong!
dea [--], 8 Mar 2009, 4:46 reply
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| haha.......ak jg ndut and jd korban cubitan........
nana [id], 12 Mar 2009, 3:16 reply
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| I like this story. The ending is unpredictable. quite
suprising.
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| ini lucu sekali hahaha bagian terakhirnya lucu sekali lebih
lucu dari pipi nya gin.
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| Crtnya bgus kali Q ambi ya??? buat tugas Q ma ksih sering2
buat cerpen ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| ceritanya cukup lucu dan menggemaskan...
pengen ikt cubit tuh pipi yang tembam.
heheheheheheheehehehee
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| wow....it's very interesting short story i think.
this story is funny :)
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| very gooooooooooooood and very
gooooooooooodddddddddddddddddd story
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| wew.. ada sedihnya ada lucunya juga .
seruu jugaaaa :))
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| this story is good and very interesting
echa [id], 11 May 2009, 5:32 reply
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| thank you very much,matur sembah suwun,matur suksama,klo
maen ke bali blg aku,aku tnggal di kuta.
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| lutu...lutu...lutu, storyna lutu bangetz
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| hahaha .. dari awal.nyh ajj udda lutcu .. keyend bgd neeh
crita.nyh
amalia [id], 5 Jun 2009, 11:50 reply
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| hahaha... garing-garing... kayak kacang euy...
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| thanks for all yg dah bikin nie, gw jdi bsa ngerjain tugas
cepet. . . . . . . . .
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| huakak_kak_kak..........
gadha nyang lebih garing ageh neeh............?!
wa kaseh lema jhempuol 2 koe tati atuna penjem we' mu sit
u2l_chan [id], 22 Jun 2009, 5:30 reply
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| thanks for your posting, it's very help to study english.
for next time, i'm wish you can better than this day
imam [id], 3 Aug 2009, 16:06 reply
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| p`misiiiii...
Blh ng`py cRpen na Gk? bwt Tgz neei. Btw yg nLz Spa
yach??????
moe2 [id], 12 Oct 2009, 6:12 reply
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| it's FuNny.. TwO tUmbS uP dUehh....
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| nice story,,, make me laugh,,, hahahahahaha,,, four thumbs
up(include my feet thumbs) hehehe
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| AqUe cUAntIIIIeq gEtOH . . .
hEe , hEe , hEe . .
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| buat para orang2 GENDUT.. sadarlah bahwa apapun itu lebih
baik, karna sadar akan kekuranganmu, tp akan msih ada
kelebihanmu.. So don't worry be happy..
gadiz [no], 9 Nov 2009, 10:24 reply
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| mksih ya..
ceerpenya bagus bgt
medisya [id], 19 Nov 2009, 1:37 reply
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| ini narrative text bukan sih ?
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| baguuuuus;yg plg pntg lucu
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| nice story, n funny, it makes me laugh anyway,,,
keep writing n let ur mind free on writing,,,,
ganbatte...!!!
mei mei [id], 8 Jan 2010, 2:25 reply
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| lumayan lah...
its funny...
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| uahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.............................
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| wah2....critanya bikin aq senyum2 ndiri....kirain
gila...
EMANG SMUA CEW NDUT DIPERLAKUKAN KYK GT YA????
oyek [--], 5 Feb 2010, 8:46 reply
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| kerennnnnnnnnnnnn....................
siska [--], 17 Feb 2010, 14:13 reply
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| ih wow, this story its very funny,,,,, pkokx
kerennnnnnnnnn
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| biasa aja.............
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| good short story,,
I like u'r story,
make better again with others story......
ok......
good luck,,_^^_
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| Aq awlx brpqr klo ini crita romantis...
Eh pas bc endingx..,trxta ini crita lucu.hahaha
lanjutin dong kisah gin n gunx alx lucu...
Thanks. 8-)
Isidora [us], 9 Apr 2010, 5:44 reply
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| bwagus bget dech crita x n menarik bwanget gtu dech
defa [id], 21 Apr 2010, 7:51 reply
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| gua kira mau apa .....
very funny ... :O bkin mules
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| wakawkawkawk.....kocak abiss.....wa kira si gunawan mw
ngomong gin aku cinta kamu....eh malah gin boleh mnjem duit
gk???Grrrrr
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| wah...gile...ckkakakakka....lanjut....xixixiixix
devi [id], 31 Jul 2010, 3:05 reply
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| wah,bagus jgk storynye,tp kurang menarik tp hebat dan
bagus....
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| bleh ktawa bntar yow....? ha ha ha ha ha ha , cukp ! al
hikayah jamil jidan .......... man ya musooni'ah ? bagus
bnget short story nya,Q iri tw......... tar kalo ke madiun
mampr ke ponpes BABUSSALAM yow......
nurul [--], 29 Sep 2010, 15:13 reply
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| Eswete BeGeTe
kwkwkwk
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| kerrreennt
ina [id], 15 Oct 2010, 4:24 reply
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| WaduH. . CritaX bgUs n LUcu. . Hm aQ ambil bwt TUgas skuL
e.. ThanKz..
Nony Ratuloly [us], 29 Oct 2010, 10:48 reply
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| wahhh ceritanya keren-----dan tak disangkah ternyata
akhirnya seperti itu hehehhe
tapi saya suka ceritanya :)
khiky [--], 24 Nov 2010, 11:19 reply
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| wooww....
kreenndzzz bgeet ,,,
gw skaa crtaa loo :)
driivanny :) [id], 28 Nov 2010, 5:38 reply
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| untung
33
8h
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| I like Your Story .... May i KnoW aBout You hehehehehe Hello
my name MarLinda rike Koropit but you can call ,me MarLinda
Ok ... Maybe i don't have Fb hehheeh ...
BanjarbaRu [id], 11 Jan 2011, 7:54 reply
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| ya ampun , ko cerita gini bgt ya ? hufh ...
sp aja [id], 26 Jan 2011, 10:17 reply
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| permulaan yg bagus untuk sebuah cerpen. kalo di kembangin
jadi buku bisa lebih bagus lagi nih. apalgi kalo ceritanya
koje ttg struggle from "fat to thin to fat" with some comdey
in it. marvelous bggt kan. kalo dah bagus kirim ke redaksi
www.bukune.com nti kamu bisa jadi penulis handal. kalo mau
buat story bareng u bisa hub in i aja, huahuahuahuahua ...
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| wkwkwkwkwkwkwk.........
garink abi3z!!!!!!!!!
sampe terpetal2 ke luar negeri... ^______________^
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| banyak buangetz. . . .but this good
arti [--], 24 Mar 2011, 5:45 reply
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| wa... g'ad yg lebih 'short' ya ceritanya? -u-
tata [--], 17 Apr 2011, 3:34 reply
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| yeeah , kereen*
not bad lah
:D
tapi lain kali lebih panjang dong
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| nice story.,so funny
you've talent in writing,.
anjun [id], 3 May 2011, 4:06 reply
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| wow....i like it...
emang nasib cewek ndut,,,,,pipi na slalu jd korban
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| hahahhaha tersinggung aku kan aku uga gendut,.. tapi seru
dech ceritanya
nurleni [--], 7 May 2011, 14:50 reply
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| Heeeehhehhee....
Good Short story
eka lestary [--], 7 Jun 2011, 6:24 reply
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| "open ending"....shrt stry tht makes me guess wht wll be
than......bgs jga v kyk cba pke' org ktga tggl main actorx
surely lbh bgs.......heheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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| wow ! its amazing !! this is very nice !! menurut dari tata
bahasa englishnya waw .... seger buat dilihat
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| very good.............
oz mw tny nie lw mw iktn krm cerpen gmn z?????
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| nice short story tp ending-nya lucu
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| bagus. cos membuat short story itu adalah (menulis) sesuatu
is the fourth language competence in language and it is the
most difficult. Bravo bwt writer. Truskan to write. It can
make money by writing.
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| I think the story is good and also the combination of
language you use, Indoensia and English. It's very useful
for student of english departement in fiction translation
subject..
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| Bgus ,.
Vany [us], 15 Sep 2011, 7:50 reply
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| I like thIS story ,. C0z it's amazing nd sngt mendEBarkn ..
Hehe .. :-)
AngeL asALaka [us], 15 Sep 2011, 7:56 reply
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| Klo gina nya pengen langsing...minum MALILEA ajha....
hehheheheehehe...
I like it...cerita pertamanya bkin penasaran...
Tp trakhir2 nya jadiii luucthhuu.... :D
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| myan wt tugas
tq
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| bagus,bangetz,gimana tuh kelanjutannya apa mereka jadian?
esnaini.umar,gmail.com [id], 9 Nov 2011, 11:51 reply
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| I like with short story comedy....
I hope many people can make comedy story again
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| i like yours short story
mantap
dhany smith [--], 16 Nov 2011, 1:22 reply
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| i like ur short story....could u make a short story about my
self.....hheeee
lis_julianti@yahoo.com [--], 3 Dec 2011, 4:59 reply
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| mau kopi, nanti tetap menyediakan link sumber
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| i like this story..
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| interesting...
really interesting...
could you make the same story as like that???
i'd like to share and take it for my wallmagazine
phantom [--], 18 Jan 2012, 13:31 reply
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| doooh sumpah anjrit keren bgt!!!! bagus lucuuuu!
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| thanks for the great post
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| I think i'ts...good story...but in the part end... Make
disaponted..... Kasihan gine she had hopped,,,gunawan will
say love to him...... Ternyata just pinjem uang..tp itu
lcu.... Di lnjtin lgi ea critanya....
Meylin [--], 12 May 2012, 7:25 reply
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| sabal ya diblang endut hehehehe sama ....senasip bgt sma
que
cra que diet ikutan spinning gelaaaaa 1 blan
rhey [--], 20 May 2012, 10:19 reply
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| funny stroy ,, n bikn deg22n jg ehehe
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| wkwkwkw.. ngakak abizzzzz
eko [--], 31 Jul 2012, 5:02 reply
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| great story,..i like it,...double language,..
ima [--], 17 Aug 2012, 10:45 reply
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| you so kampret gun.. yeah.. :D :p
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| This Story very good, but I think you don't need to make the
translate
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